First post to the list, although I've been lurking for a while (with another
mail adress, incidentally...)
Anyway, I was cleaning up on my USB stick and found an attempt at a fic,
that I worked on while I was in China, almost a year ago. I thought I'd post
it and see what you people have to say about it. Looking at it myself, I
only see lots of flaws, gaping plot holes and stupid clich�es (sp?).
Question: should I go on with this, or should I just drop my ugly attempts
at prose and go write the technobabble I usually write?
Any and all answers are appreciated.
(fic attached as plaintext)

Cheers,
TheFluff



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