Subject: [FFML] Re: [FanFic][SM] NETTG - Terra in Tokyo Ch.1
From: DB Sommer
Date: 4/15/2006, 3:51 PM
To: "Benjamin A. Oliver" <boliver@email.arizona.edu>
CC: ffml@anifics.com


% ought to throw out a little something with what little time I have.

Benjamin A. Oliver wrote:

 > Nuke 'Em 'Till They Glow!!
 > Terra in Tokyo
 > 
 >

% Oh, this should be fun.

 > ---Chapter 1:  Just Plain Wrong
 >
 >     "Hiya, Mister Ander!  I see you finally got Mister Robinson to 
give you your
 > pitchfork back.  Too bad it's jabbed into your chest, huh?  Okies, gotta
 > go--b'bye!"
 > 
 >

% I see Johan from Monster has been through here. :)

 >
 >     If ignorance was bliss, Terra was the happiest girl in the whole 
wide world. 
 >

% Since Mihoshi didn't live on Earth, Terra's rank of happiest would 
probably remain intact.

 >     "Haaai!"  Skipping along the way, the adolescent swung her book 
bag back and
 > forth while singing, "Junior high!  Junior high!  I don't know why, 
but it's...
 > junior high!"  She was so excited she hardly noticed when she knocked 
down
 > another girl with her bag and trampled her badly before continuing on 
her merry
 > way.
 > 
 >

% Excel was quite irritated by the insensative girl's actions.

 > ---
 >
 >     "Hey!" Naru called after the girl who had run her over.  She got 
back up,
 > dusted herself off, and sped after the whirling, skipping human 
juggernaut. "Hold up!"
 > 
 >

Terra, being a polite girl, decided to do as Naru ordered, pulling out a 
gun and making Naru give her all her money.

 >     "Is she a cute boy?  Should I ask her out?"
 > 
 >

% Yuri fans around the world vote: Yes

 >     "Then once we find that problem, we'll BLOW IT TO BITS!!!"
 >
 >     "YEAH, BABY!"
 > 
 >

% Amen

 >
 >     "Oh," Haruna hesitated, "it seems that Terra is a foreigner, from 
Ireland. Therefore, she does not understand how to speak properly to her 
equals nor
 > superiors.
 >

% Terra; Oh, I have neither, given my galaxy destroying powers. I could 
eat Galactus for breakfast and wash him down with Metallia and Beryl.

 >     "Because, take it from me, this hurts quite a lot."
 >
 >     The sweet little schoolgirl heard a harsh discord somewhere 
between her eyes,
 > and then everything went black.
 > 
 >

% Nice start. Will try to get to more later.

 >
 > 
 >


 



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