Quoting StudioPC <studiopc@sbcglobal.net>:

'It's a tried and true tactical theorem,' Mercury said. 'The enemy
of  
my enemy is my friend. Perhaps we can make some sort of deal. The
one  
called Strange seems approachable, but I have no idea what we can 

offer them.'

Sexual favours?  

Ami absently scribbled a note to herself regarding the logic
pattern  
the teacher was assigning as homework.

'No,' Spiderwoman insisted. 'We can't trust him, we can't trust any
 
of them.'

'We have no choice. We need their help. Tomorrow is Sunday, we
should  
spend it doing research.'

* * * *

Sunday Night . . .

  Luna had been asleep on Usagi's chest when she sensed something 

approaching and the sheer power of it raised her hackles. But she
was  
unafraid. The Mau weren't without power in their own right and Luna
 
had not won her position as the Moon Princess' Guardian and advisor
 
to the Senshi by being weak.

Like a ghost, the thing passed through the wards that Luna had set
up  
around the house and began to coalesce at the foot of Usagi's bed.

Teeth bared and claws out, Luna stood up to attack and then saw the
 
amulet around the figure's neck. She sat, tail curled about her
feet  
and waited. Still wary, but if that amulet was the real thing . .
.

"Greetings, guardian of the line of Diana," the figure said  
respectfully, bowing ever so slightly. His tone was formal, the  
language ancient. Tonight marked the first time it had been spoken
in  
thousands of years. 

Well there was that time Setsuna dropped a rock on her foot in the 17th
century...

He removed the amulet and held it out to her

for  
inspection. Ears twitching, Luna examined it with all eight of her 

senses. Yes! Thank the Mother, yes! It was the Eye!

The most important of which was her fashion sense.  No other jewelry
could be quite so tacky...

The game was against Eriol Academy, a cross town rival to Juuban. 

There was a history of ruthless competition between the schools,
each  
one boasting an impressive list of Alumni.

That word should not be capitalised.  

The biggest concern was Tamayo Kuzuki, a tomboy with a reputation
for  
being one of the few people who'd ever made Flash work for a
victory  
at karate meets.

"Kuzuki is small and fast," Flash lectured the team as they
gathered  
for the pre-game meeting. "She may not look it, but she hits hard
and  
she likes to go for the neck." She pointed at the Twins, a the only

Twins, the

 
girls at school who were bigger than Flash. They also had very
little  
neck to speak of. "You two keep her away from the puck, I don't
care  
how. Kusango, Sawamura, you two stick with me. Everyone else keep 

"Take  
Kusango out. At least I know there's a trap waiting out there."

You spell that name Kusanago earlier.  

David Banterman, ne Bruce Banner, A.K.A. The Incredible Hulk, was 

surprised when he realized he was enjoying himself. He supposed
part  
of it was that only one-third of him was still Bruce Banner, a
small  
statued genius with some big brains. The other two parts of his  

statured

Sailor Moon hugged Jupiter and Spiderwoman. "Sorry to worry you,"
she  
whispered and then stood back. "Guys, I'd like you to meet Doctor 

Strange, Mystic Master of the Occult, and you already know

I'd suggest going with "Master of the Mystic Arts"

"Ah, Nicholas," Strange said, "I see the government reputation for 

punctuality continues."

"I see you live up to the government's reputation for punctuality

Fury pointed at the Dark Skinned Man. "Colonel Bridge and the other

No need to capitalise those words.  

Usaga and had certain hereditary titles and duties. One of those
was  
keeping safe an Artifact of vast power called the Silver Crystal.

artifact

"Correct," Luna said. "However, remember that Beryl serves
Mettalia,  

Metallia is the way that name is normally spelled.  

and limits. She has displayed a willingness to break the law, a  
disregard for her own safety, and a lack of remorse for her
actions,  
thus meeting four of the seven diagnoses for antisocial personality
 
disorder. Technically, it can't be formally diagnosed before she's 

eighteen, but the signs are there and I believe that this is one
case  
where we can't wait four years."

I kind of doubt that someone with anti-social personality disorder
would have been all that thrown by learning Naru was out to get her.  
They're devoid of much capacity for remorse or fear and they just
don't care that much about anyone else.  Therefore I diagnose Banner
as a quack.  



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