Great chapter. Loving the interplay between Sakura and Anko. Anko's a fun
character, and it's nice to see her get some fun "screen time".

I do think you're slightly OVERplaying Naruto's innate stupidity, though.
Even Naruto has at least the bare minimum of intelligence to understand the
concept of not marching into enemy territory without a suitable disgui--

...
...

Okay, so he doesn't, but I still think he'd at least understand it the first
time it was explained to him. He's not THAT stu--

...

...

...nevermind.

And props to having SOMEONE *FINALLY* point out to Naruto that day-glo
orange is a BAD colour for a ninja!

By the way...TELL ME YOU ARE NOT WRITING THE BEE-FREAKS FROM THE BIKOUCHUU
ARC INTO THIS THING.

...you ARE writing them into this thing. Egad. X_X

Oh, and thanks a lot, incidentally--I have an image firmly stuck in my head
now of Oiroke!Naruto in a short, tight black minidress and matching heels...
:P

*tries to force that mental image to morph into Tsukino Usagi in the same
outfit, passes out from sudden blood surge*

Looking forward to more!

The Eternal Lost Lurker
www.lurkerdrome.com



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