The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:
One Hundred Days
A Naruto Fanfic
By: Aaron Nowack
Chapter 1: The First Week
So there's going to be what, 14 chapters, plus a prologue and epilogue?
At the moment, the rough plan is for fifteen chapters, plus the prologue
and epilogue. Each should cover about a week, except for the last
chapter which will cover the last two days. That can (and likely will)
change, but that's the plan right now.
The man leapt backward, drawing his weapon. "I won't go down
easily."
"Is that so?" Kabuto let out an overdramatic sigh. "I gave
exactly the orders I wanted carried out. Why would I kill you?"
Because you're a sick, twisted bastard?
Indeed.
Naruto peered curiously over the Sannin's shoulder. "Rabbit
moon fire... it doesn't make any sense!"
Aaaa! Jiraiya is writing yuri Sailormoon lemons!
No, that's what he wrote before he got published. ;)
Jiraiya bit at his thumb, just hard enough to break the skin and cause
blood to flow. He placed his hand on the ground. "Summoning
Technique," he breathed.
Might wanna use the Japanese terms for technique names...same principle as
the other thing I mentioned. Not that there's anything WRONG with doing it
this way, it just doesn't look as good.
As I mention in the author's notes, while I'd like to use Japanese
technique names, I can't without sacrificing the ability to easily add
new techniques. So I'm pretty much stuck with using translated names
for the most part.
"That's correct!" he said, far too loudly. "Those are the very
first pair of weights I gave my Lee-kun to train with!" He grinned, and
Sakura turned her eyes away from the painful brightness of his smile.
"With them, you'll get stronger for certain!"
Or break every bone in your body trying.
Strangely, that never seems to happen in fighting anime. :)
Tsunade tried to restrain a wince at the idea of Hyuuga Hiashi's
reaction if she sent Hinata on a mission with Anko. The special
jounin's face darkened slightly, and Tsunade realized she hadn't done
very well at that. "Sorry, Anko-chan, but it just isn't possible.
"But," she continued, folding her hands in front of her face, "I
believe I know someone who will work."
Poor Sakura-chan...Anko is going to thoroughly corrupt her.... XD
It is an interesting combination, isn't it? Throwing the two of them
together is a bit of a homage to Eimii's Suiren (besides being an excuse
to bring one of my favorite minor characters into the story), though
their relationship will of course develop differently than in that story.
Quite looking forward to chapter two.
Glad to hear it, and thanks again for commenting!