And I'll take another few minutes to look this one over and fulfill my 
contriubtion to the list

Michael Hopcroft wrote:

First part of a new series. C&C appreciated.

THE TAO OF OSAKA-SENSEI
 

Should be interesting.

An Azumanga Daioh Fanfiction
by Michael Hopcroft

Episode 1: Start the Year Right

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Azumanga Daioh. That is owned by Kiyohiko Azuma  
and his representatives, ADV Manga and ADV Films.

1. Driving
 

And I see the scene divisions are here.

“I never used to hang around with her. All she talked about was how  
wonderful her husband was. Still, if some gorgeous young guy takes over  
for her I'll be happy.”
 

Minamo: Why? He won't be interested in someone like you.

“You must be thinking of Kagura, that swimmer.” Yukari said, trying to be  
helpful. “I must admit that was a coup, getting her into my class.”
 

 True

Yukari blanched visibly. “No. It' can't be. It can't possibly be...”

A young woman walked up to the group, smiling vacantly. “It has been a  
long time. I hope you'll be nice senpais for me.” she said, bowing  
 

My recommendation is 'me." She bowed...  and then making Yukari part of 
the next paragraph.


politely. Yukari suddenly grasped the horrible truth of her situation.

“OSAKA! You're Osaka!”

“Students calling me that is 

"Having the students..."

Osaka said “Well, first I sent in the application, and then I did the  
interview. Isn't that how you were hired?”
 

Yukari: No, the headmaster recognized me so I had to give him a blow job.

“Miss Kasuga get very good marks in teaching college and displayed a sound  
knowledge of her subject matter. Besides, I seem to distinctly recall  
giving a chance to a certain English teacher whose own high school  
performance was, shall we say, less than stellar.” 

steller,

“Do you understand me?”

Nyamo extended her right hand, still restraining Yukari with her left arm.  
“Welcome back, Osaka. I hope everything works out for you here.”

“I hope so too. And before the meeting, I wanted to thank you so much,  
Yukari-senpai. Without you I wouldn't be here. Thanks.”

“No good deed goes unpunished.”

comma here too.

“Next year? Ther4e's 

stray number

a new Zelda game coming out next year – and wait a  
minute, how the hell would a rookie teacher know about it?”

Osaka smiled. “I have connections.”
 

Heh. She's wised up a bit

“And what's in it for Taka? I mean, having to live with you?”

“Taka likes having me around. Says I'm a great source of ideas.”
 

Yes, I can see that

Yukari slammed her fist on Osaka's desk. “Wait a minute – your roommate is  
a guy?!? You live with a guy?!?”
 

Yukari: Don't tell me you've landed a guy before I did.

Nyamo shouted out “Don't do it! It's a trick!”

“It's all right, Nyamo-senpai. What's the use of a trap if you don't walk  
in?”
 

*Nod nod*

“I thought the idea was to not walk into traps.”

“What's the fun in that?”
 

"Where's

“I can do it,” Osaka said. “Sounds like a nice chance to get some free  
drinks.”
 

*Nod Nod*

Yukari smiled. “You won't be so confident when you're on your third beer!”

“Oh, I don't drink beer. Can't stand the taste. I'll be drinking something  
else.”

“Nothing non-alcoholic counts!”

“Oh, that's not a problem. I think I'll he

be

Yukari moaned and staggered to her desk. “This is going to be a long, long  
year.” she said.
 

Hmm. Last one fell a bit flat, but overall entertaining

DB SOmmer

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