Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 09/26/2005 05:12 AM, DB Sommer said:

 

thing she had going for her was luck in being in the right place at
the right time, and luck was no substitute for skill.
   

She seems to be able to keep her wits when things hit the toilet, but I
don't think he's interested in that.  Then a mime is a terrible thing to
waste.
 

% He sees the bad in everything, including her good taste to not sleep 
with him.

The technician hurried off, leaving Toji to wail impotently at the 
injustice of fate.
   

Some days it just don't pay to chew through the straps.
 

% oui

A door opened at the front of the bank, heralding a shield-toting 
redhead. "Doors, guys! Doors! It's okay to use them."
   

Third time this week?
 

% pretty much

A woman's voice came from the doorway, declaring in an announcer's 
voice, "There you have it, folks. We finally have the answer to the 
questions on everyone's minds: is Bucky a natural redhead?"
   

Inquiring minds, or at least the TV audience, want to know.  Akemi also
seems to have a knack for being in the right place at the right time.
Could that be a super power?
 

% Heh. Or plot contrivance.

"Popular, or merely notable? And what is it that makes her popular?
Do people cite the lives she's saved, or how many times she jiggles
when she throws a punch?"
   

Jiggles.
 

% Yep. Wait until you see her action figure.

DB Sommer


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