Subject: [FFML] Re: [fusion][R1/2/Marvel] Avenging Chapter 6: Not So Startling Revelations
From: DB Sommer
Date: 9/27/2005, 11:13 PM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net
CC: ffml@anifics.com




rgorman@telusplanet.net wrote:

Quoting DB Sommer <sommert@connecttime.net>:

 

do was get into the vault, grab the money, and he'd have it all.

The super-villain released one of the dozen white-faced that had
   


white-faced heros
 


% Used your grammar recommendations.

 

been so 
easily incapacitated. He warned, "Don't try anything, or we'll find
out 
if my cloth drill can bore its way through human flesh better than
steel 
doors."

The mime began pantomiming. Gypsy Moth watched closely, speaking
aloud 
to make certain he understood things correctly. "You're� not� a� 
superhero�. You� and� your� companions� are� just� ordinary�
mimes." 
   


Pantomime isn't sign language.  He wouldn't spell out every word in
gestures separately.  It would go something like:

"Superhero?  Not a superhero?  You...  and your companions...  are just
ordinary mimes?"
 


% Hmm. I had decided to not do that based on the fact it would draw 
things out, and had him get it 'right' from the outset. Maybe I should 
change it, though.



 


"Yeah. It's all I can do to keep from turning as green as you in
envy," 
she said flatly.

"Hulk knew," he said smugly.
   


Heck, maybe the big guy's even right.  
 


% Heh.

 

"It's where some people on it feel it's a team, but others say it's
just 
a collection of individuals with an ever changing roster."
   


Teams have a roster.  Collections of individuals just have people
who happen to be in the same place.  
 


% Good point. Will change

 

"Fine," Bucky said. "Next question, why did you pick a stupid name
like 
Gypsy Moth?"

"Because I can telekinetically control cloth." He laughed in a 
half-crazed, half-sinister, fashion.

The Hulk was the first to react. "That's a stupid superpower."
   


The Hulk knows what "telekinetically" means?  
 


% No, but he picked up on GM controlling clothing.

 

"I knew it!" Bucky shouted, looking like she was ready to turn
around 
and walk out. "As soon as I laid eyes on that stupid outfit I knew
this 
guy was a moron. We should have let Daredevil handle it solo. His 
rogue's gallery is nothing but losers. Some cloth controlling bug
guy 
would be a perfect addition to it."
   


Daredevil:  Well at least I have a rogue's gallery.  When's the last
time you took on someone on your own?  
 


% Heh. Maybe off camera, though he did try to fight the Hulk one on one.

 


 

Bucky wrapped herself in the cape. While she was a tall, buxom
girl,
   


She is?  She generally looks to be roughly the height of all the other
girls in the manga and anime although better endowed.  
 


% The same Super Soldier Serum that made Ranma into a tall strapping man 
did the same with his femal form, except the man bit. She's the peak of 
physical perfection with that genetic structure while still being 
one-hundred percent human.

 

Gym class was a pain, Ukyou decided. Sports bras were a hassle, and
she 
hated those idiot ensembles girls had to wear. Guys' gym clothes
were 
more practical, comfortable, and never rode into her crotch.
   


On the other hand Ukyou probably found finding a way to change without
any boy seeing to be a bit of a pain.  
 


% She alludes to it later.

 

some 
excuse. Maybe she had late homework she had to turn in. It was
either 
that or come up with a plastic outfit.
   


Which might not work anyway.  Gypsy Moth's limitation is probably
psychological meaning that he could control anything that he thought
of as clothing.  
 


% Nope, sadly Gypsy Moth/Skien's power is restricted to dead organic 
material like that. She's like the Magneto of clothing, which isn't 
anywhere as near as impressive as it sounds. On the plus side, she was 
able to defeat Crimson Cowl II in an eyeblink when CC was beating the 
crap out of the Thunderbolts. (As a side note, destroying the first 
Crimson Cowl's uniform would have been a useless gesture, since Ultron 
was underneath the garb.)


 

Satisfied her point had been made (if only she knew about it) Ukyou

accepted the offer, drew another arrow and lined up for another
shot. 
Pride wouldn't allow her to 'miss' so badly a second time. 
   


Good sense wouldn't let her do that twice.  It was reckless to do it
once.  
 


% Yep, though Jessie can tell the difference between a truly crap archer 
and a good one trying to shoot poorly, so she'll be suspicious. Truly 
skilled people have difficutly hiding their abilities.

% Hmm. This ended abruptly. Was that all or did some get cut off?

DB Sommer





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