StudioPC wrote:

On Sep 13, 2005, at 10:42 AM, Chester Castaneda wrote:

 

On 8/1/05, StudioPC <studiopc@sbcglobal.net> wrote:
   

Twisting the lever, he parked the horse by the tree and stared at the
young
lady standing by the wall, chewing on a blade of grass. Her bright
red hair
was tied back from her face in a long pigtail and she wore a long red
cloak. She looked much like his female self, but smaller and more
slender.

     

Strangely enough, from my end, your fic has formatting problems  
roughly at this point of the story (which is weird, 'coz it's quite  
okay during the earlier parts). The thing of most note are the  
single to double word line spaces of 'young', 'red hair', and  
'slender' seen above. Perhaps your mail client has its own  
formatting, thusly double formatting your already formatted fic?  
Just a head's up, coz many of your paragraphs have somehow ended up  
this way.
   

Might be the monitor size, I use a 17 inch Apple flatscreen display  
at high rez.
 

Nope, it was you...  You're email client observes the 72 char/line 
convention.  You should either turn off wordwrap on whatever text editor 
you're using to write the story and let you're email client do the work 
or set the wrap to 72 chars, or less.

That portion of your story seems to have ben wraped at 80 chars. Thus 
any line that falls between 72 and 80 chars get's wraped twice...


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