From: <mille2ml@jmu.edu>
To: Eric Holdt <dragonboy1098@hotmail.com>, ffml@anifics.com
Subject: Re: [FFML] FFML:[Ranma 1/2][fanfic][Formula for Disaster Chapter 
2]
Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2005 13:25:46 -0400

Formula For Disaster
by Dragonboy & Stiel

First of all, that was really entertaining.

D&S:  Thank you! : D

Some of the dialogue seemed a bit off, namely Cologne. Still,
it was funny so I'd leave it.

Dragonboy:  Of all the Ranma 1/2 characters, I consider Cologne to be the 
hardest to write properly.  Everyone else has their own quirks that set them 
apart from each other, but I've never really been able to capture Cologne's 
peronality, other than she's wise, crafty and can be very manipulative at 
times (Almost like an elderly version of Nabiki, just not out to make money)

The whole feel of the fic was
right on target. Fast paced, no intense thought, and Ranma's
day just progressively getting worse and worse. And worse. And
hopefully worse.

Stiel:  Oh trust us, it'll get worse long before it gets better. ; )

I'd say leave Taro stuck to Ranma. Why?
Because dumping on Ranma is fun.

Dragonboy:  That it is.

Stiel:  Rest assured, Taro will be having a big impact on this fic.  We just 
have to figure out exactly what that impact is going to be first. : p


Only real suggestion is keep

the fic moving as quickly as it is, and resist bogging down.

D&S:  Will do!  Thanks for the comments.  Will try to have chapter three out 
sooner than chapter two was.

Miashara

Dragon Stiel Inc.
Proudly reviewing (And writing) fanfics for over a month.

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