rgorman@telusplanet.net wrote:

Quoting DB Sommer <sommert@connecttime.net>:

 

Saginomiyas� private holdings, as agreed to by the late Masahiro 
Saginomiya, who put all of his worldly possessions up as
collateral.� 
The judge pounded his gavel with his judgment made.
   

The judge pounded his gavel to declare his judgement made.
 

% I worded that badly. Will work on it.

outdoors, but the energy cannon they had developed was still top
secret, 
and there was no telling what sort of eavesdropping equipment by
rival 
companies might be trained on KI�s exterior. 
   

Not to mention the spy satellites of certain foreign powers.  
 

% True, though business rivals would move faster, since they don't have 
to deal with government levels of bueracracy.

features of the Safecracker is that it has a precise range,
mitigating 
collateral damage. If you�re trying to hit a target that moves out
of 
the path of the beam, you don�t have to worry about it following
through 
and hitting something you don�t want destroyed.�
   

In fact given that this beam is capable of cutting through anything 
short of adamantium, even if you hit you don't want it to just keep 
going.
 

% That too

t was time Kunou Industries stuck with mechanical engineering, and
not 
waste money on building the better tropical fruit.
   

Thus sparking the origin of the Porcupineapple!
 

% Ugh! wait a minute, wasn't he a DC villain?

The head of security said, �Ma�am, radar just picked up an
unidentified 
object moving at a high velocity toward��

The rest was cut off as a wide beam of ruby energy lanced down from
the 
sky and blew up the prototype construction vehicle.
   

Wouldn't the pulse beam work better.  
 

% Probably, but she loves that Blaze Cannon. By the way, for purists, 
Asuka's armor is a cross between Iron Man's old foe, Mauler and the one 
shot Steel Samurai, though the pulse bolts belonged to Shellhead during 
the 'Silver Sphinx' armor days.

% Hey, for the first time I'm reading my Iron Man series in order from 
1-200, so sue me. It's also a lot better flow to the series when you get 
issue 15, then three years later 17, then five years after that, 16. :)

various weapons. While she didn�t deliberately target any human
beings, 
she didn�t go out of her way to make certain everyone was in the
clear 
when she opened fire either.

After gleefully blowing apart every vehicle in sight, an amusing
idea 
occurred to Steel Lilly. She reactivated her loudspeaker and said,
   

"Lily".  
 

Redid that thoughout the story.

marked 
the woman as being one of the first to fall when she managed to
break 
out of here. 
   

I'd suggest making the guard a bit ruder to earn her place on Asuka's 
hitlist.  Like leaving out the "Miss".  
 

% Good idea. It's now 'Tin Lily'

 

% Thanks for the help. It's really appreciated.

DB Sommer


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