Wow... Just wow.

You ask for proofreaders to go over your stuff.

I figured i would be nice and help out. I spend 4 hours making
corrections, only making it to page TEN FREAKING PAGE TEN.

Then you skip my advice and post that pos to ff.net any way.
God damn that pisses me off. 

GTFO my Internet.

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