Quoting Nicholas Stone <bnstone@comcast.net>:

�So, we think this is a piece of cake.  Sadly we were wrong.  That

So, we think this is a piece of cake, but we couldn't get much more
wrong.  

       �That�s me again, boss,� said Tanyun.  �That little battle
in the
NekkoHatten, well I heard the cops coming and with what few men I

Still the wrong spelling.  

       �We didn�t get to Tatewaki, boss.�
       �You didn�t?�
       �No� I held back and sent the guys� ahead just in case, you

guys

       ��Put to sleep� and then I heard this scary laugh.  Sort �a
like
a woman�s titter, creepy.  Very Creepy.  The Kuno grounds are

titter, but creepy, very creepy.  

       �Ah, no, Boss.  We got there and things were quiet.  I go to
the
gate and find it locked. That was odd, so I knock and wouldn�t you
know
it, one of the boys� answers.�

boys answers

       ��and an old guy; might have been her dad, another withered
old
fiend and this large Giant Panda Bear.�

this giant panda bear.

       Resting his head in his hands, Okura let out a deep sigh
not
believing the potential disaster that could befall them at any
moment.
He shook his head in disbelief, feeling this was at the lowest

delete "at"

point
ever in his life and all because of some small time accountant from
the
township of Nerima.

       Vicky smirked casting a wry look upon him.  She shrugged
and

smirked,

       �Bring her in, please, Victoria.�
       Vicky opened the door and in walked Nabiki dressed in her
best
business suit carrying a medium sized black bundle under one arm. 

medium-sized

Chino
followed close behind, eagerly listening to every word Nabiki was
saying
to him as he did.
       ��and I�ll make sure Moussa knows that you still desire
her,�
said Nabiki.

       Tanyun looked back over his shoulder at Chino and then shook
his
head.  �Nah, we�d better not.  It�d kill him.�

More to the point, he'd kill you.  

       �Really?  So with that evidence why are not trying to force

why aren't you

me
out of my position then?  Takeover, like I know a person like you
would
want to do?�

       Of all the things dear to him, Vicky held the highest spot
and
Okura did not wish to loose her.  Nabiki�s demands although steep

Oddly enough "loose" almost works there.  Rare, that.  

were
not that damaging, but to allow Vicky too leave him brought a pain
new
to his heart.  He found himself looking over at her, distressed and
then
wondered if he was being selfish denying her the right to leave if
she
wished.  She had become more than just his secretary and realized
then
that meant more to him than the entire company itself.

Uh-hunh.  Sure.  

       Maeda turned away, meeting the expectant stares from his
companions, and then sighed.  �It will be done,� he said.
       �Now,� demanded Nabiki.
       He tensed narrowing his eyes at her.  Slowly, Okura reached
into
his jacket and pulled out the dark green passport, 

He carries around the passport on him?  Why that sentimental fool.  


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