Only have time for one more before I have to leave;


Michael P. Hopcroft wrote:

SEVEN QUIET DAYS
A You're Under Arrest Fanfic
by Michael Hopcroft


DISCLAIMER: I don't own You're Under Arrest. Kysouke Fujishima does, I'm
borrowing the characters in the great doujin spirit.


�Summer leave?� Sergeant Miyuki Kobayakawa and Sergeant Natsumi
Tsujimoto excalimed with one voice?

just a period there

Kaicho smiled. �You both recently passed the examination to become
Sergeants. You have vast career and personal opportunties open to you.
To be honest, I'm afraid I'm about to lose you.�

Natsumi swalloed. �Lose us?� The thought of leaving Bokutoo Precinct,
and all the friends she had made there, seemed inconvievable..

And might end the series, leaving her unemployed

Miyuki looked startled. �Homicide? Why would I want to be a homicide
detective?�

Miyuki: I only deal with misdemanors for the most part, never anything 
involving actual death or permenant bodily harm. Perhaps I could bring in 
Strikeman again.

Natsumi smirked. �You must admit you've got the brains for it.�

�And it is a fast-track to Inspector,� Kaicho added. �And Special
Tactics is strongly interested in you, Tsujimoto.�

�Special tactics? You mean with guns and everything? I mean, I may be
pretty good at paintball, but I've seen what real guns do! You kill
people with guns! I may have beaten up some perps poretty

pretty

iyuki collected herself. �Yes, she is. Come on in. I'll tell the doorman.�

�Arigato, Kobaayakawa-san.� Miyuki swicthed the let the doorman know,
but she was crestfallen. She was Kobayakawa-san to everybody, and
Miyuki-san to Natsumi. She wasn't Miyuki to anyone. Nobody had gained
that inimacy, and the thought struck her like a sixteen-ton weight
falling on her head.

A few mintues later Miyuki let Toukarin in. �Come on in, Toukarin-san.
I'll try to see what Natsumi-kun is.....�

'SHOUJI!� Natsumi suddenly ran itno the room, made a bee-line for
Toukarin and grabbed him in an mebarce

embrace

that would have curshed

crushed

If anything, Natsumi glomped him ever harder this time. �Shouji! That's
so thoughtful! When does the flight leave?�

�7:30am from Narita. That enough time for you to getg

get

He had the passion that Miyuki lacked. His personality was a perfect
match for hers. No doubt when they got to that hotel that passion would
spill itself over and the two of them would spend hours doing the sorts
of things that men and women do. Natsumi desired him, and he her, and
sparks wree

were

 going to fly when they got behind closed doors. Sooner or

later, natsum

Natsumi

 would decide she couldn't live without thsat

that

lots of basic grammar errors here. This needed looked over with a spell 
check

At seven o'clock, Miyuki let Ken into the apartment. He looked around
appreciatvely. �I wish I could keep my place this neat, and it's only
about half the size.� he said.

�It's work, but I like a neat place. But you've been here before, with
Natsumi-kun and I.�

�Yes, but never alone. In fact, it's been a long time since I've been
alone in a woman's apartment with her and it wasn't on duty. In fact, I
don't think I've been in a situation like this since high school.�

�Situation? This isn't a situation, it's a meal.

Depending on how she cooks, it might be more of a situation than a meal

Cute story. Nice work. Nothing much else to say, other than the spell check 
thing.

DB Sommer 



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