Man, I've gotten behind with my e-mail.

The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:

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                      EPILOGUE TWO:
                 Kimagure Orange Ryouga
   

*wince* That title hurts.

 

It'll be especially baffling for those who don't know about
KOR. "Kima whatta what?"

She squeezed his arm affectionately. The point of the exercise
wasn't really to teach him to cook, although that would be a
nice side benefit. Ryouga went through life kind of like a human
   

"kind of like" is not a good phrase to use in narrative. Dialogue, yes, but
not narrative.

 

Gotcha.

"Don't worry, sugar," she told him. "We'll get those hair-
trigger reflexes under control. After all, you don't want to
accidentally break Akari in half on your honeymoon."
   

Nah, she's used to the sumo pigs. :P

 

Um... are you suggesting that she... and the pigs...
All right. Not thinking about that.

Ukyou and Ryouga lay together in the darkness, each lost in the
other's eyes, each found in each other's heart, bathed as one in
the silver light of the moon and stars.
   

*applauds*

Well done and bravo!

It has truly been a satisfying journey throughout this story. Many kudos
(and maybe an edogawa) to you, Towler-san, on this marvelously crafted epic.
^_^

 

Many thanks, Lurker-san. It's been a fun ride.


Grayson Towler
http://www.talesfromthevault.com/thunderstruck

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