Just a few quick comments, as I'm too zonked from months of Ph.D. work to
comment in depth:

The encounter between the Love Hina and Ranma casts was pretty good.  Not
spectacular, but introductions rarely are.

The Ryouga meets Tenchi crew had a few problems, though also some interesting
bits:

1) I am inclined to think Tenchi would try to hide that he's living with
Aliens, not tell his family's big secret to a stranger he just met.  Everyone
trying and failing to hide their powers would also give you a stronger
dynamic for this scene, I think.

2) The bit where Ryouga turned into a pig was very good; this crew would
definitely want to play with the cute piggy.  

3) I liked your use of Wasyuu.

4) This part has a little more of...I'm not sure how to say it.  Everyone in
the Tenchi cast seems a little too eager to explain everything about
themselves, while the intro of the Love Hina crew felt more natural to me.

Anyway, I hope that helps.



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