She was, indeed, as stunning as the boy had claimed.  She
knelt there beside the spring, preparing herself for her bath
with delicate gestures, naked as the day she was born save for
a yellow bandanna tying back her long, black hair.  Her body

Is he wearing a wig? I didn't think they were on the road long enough for
Ryoga's hair to grow *that* much longer.

It was stated in a previous chapter that Ryouga's hair is longer in girl
form. Not sure if it was long enough to be "long", but it WAS stated.

He heard the tapping of a few keys as Nabiki double-checked
this information on her computer.

Would she be able to check that without being dialed up?

Welcome to the broadband age.

Maybe I'm oversensitive to negative treatments of Genma

You are. Genma is so far beneath contempt, even child molestors spit on him.

Well, all I can say is, YAY! A great read, as always, with good
characterization, a gripping plot, and funny comic relief. A little

heavier on

the latter than usual, maybe, but nothing that would undermine the serious
parts. I'm really looking forward to seeing more.

I'd just like to add, since I'm lazy and feel like piggybacking my comments
on someone else's, that I loved the snowboarding scene. ^_^

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