The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:

She was, indeed, as stunning as the boy had claimed.  She
knelt there beside the spring, preparing herself for her bath
with delicate gestures, naked as the day she was born save for
a yellow bandanna tying back her long, black hair.  Her body
     

Is he wearing a wig? I didn't think they were on the road long enough for
Ryoga's hair to grow *that* much longer.
   

It was stated in a previous chapter that Ryouga's hair is longer in girl
form. Not sure if it was long enough to be "long", but it WAS stated.

 

I figure if the curse can make so many other radical changes
on your anatomy, a little hair adjustment isn't too farfetched.
Besides, I did a sketch of a long-haired Ryouga-chan and 
liked the feel of it.

He heard the tapping of a few keys as Nabiki double-checked
this information on her computer.
     

Would she be able to check that without being dialed up?
   

Welcome to the broadband age.
 

They had to get broadband when Kurumi moved in. The
girl is a serious video game freak. 

Well, all I can say is, YAY! A great read, as always, with good
characterization, a gripping plot, and funny comic relief. A little
   

heavier on
 

the latter than usual, maybe, but nothing that would undermine the serious
parts. I'm really looking forward to seeing more.
   

I'd just like to add, since I'm lazy and feel like piggybacking my comments
on someone else's, that I loved the snowboarding scene. ^_^

 

I'm glad that scene has gone over so well with people,
because I swear, it was the single most difficult one to
find an angle for. It gave me the most headaches whenever
I was drafting the chapter (and this is over a period
of four years)... "What the hell am I going to do for
the goddamned rescue scene?" I went through a dozen
iterations that I hated before the snowboarding idea
finally gelled.

I know someone asked the question of where they got the
snowboards... but really, if you start getting too worried
about where object x or y came from in the Ranmaverse,
the whole thing falls apart. It's Shampoo's foresight
about the terrain they'd be facing at work - and of course,
Amazons love snowboarding.

SHAMPOO: Hmph! Amazon invented snowboarding 2800 year ago.
Take rest of world that long to catch up.

Thanks for the comments...

Grayson Towler
http://www.talesfromthevault.com/relentless

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