Michael A Chase also wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

For some reason, all the 'friendly' punctionation disappeared when I
loaded the text into my word processor (OOo 1.9.87).  They usually show
up as a box character.

Hmm. Odd. Don't think I did anything different

within.

{Its : It's} inconceivable, Dr. Doom mumbled to himself.

Chi? The Chobit he was working on inquired.

He must use that word a lot.  Perhaps it doesn't mean what he thinks it
means.

Heh. Most people seem to say that. 

Chi rose to her feet and flipped up her skirt. She pointed at her 
underwear. Panties.

Anything else?

Where's Happousai when you need him?

Heh

The surge of power went directly into Chiis neural net, slightly 
melting one of the key circuits. It was only a slight marring, but it
was there. As the surge finally petered out, Chiis features shifted
from that of a wide-eyed innocent, to one of calculation that would
have done Doom himself proud.

Especially since she's probably twice as smart as he is now.

Nah. They are about even. She just has the advantage of surprise

Thanks for the help. 

DB Sommer


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