Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fanfic][Ranma] Relentless - Chapter 1
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 4/10/2005, 5:22 PM
To: thunderstruck_comic@comcast.net
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 04/03/2005 06:27 PM, Thunderstruck said:

<Well, well,> Happosai thought.  <He tagged me, and I didn't even 
mean to let him do it.  Someday, he might be good enough to 
actually beat me.  If he lives that long...>

If he does survive, Ranma will certainly be more than a match for Happosai.

She'd been encased up to her elbows when the batter had finally 
hardened into something not unlike concrete.  

If the cake never made it to the oven, it would make Ranma's switcheroo 
plan a lot harder to pull off.

"There is only one hope," Cologne said.  "I cannot guess what 
Happosai did to get someone to set the Reikoku after him.  I 
don't even really know who might have such power in this day.  
But you must find him, and discover what he has done."

It's a little odd that Cologne knows so much about the Reikoku but 
doesn't know about the Temple of Three.  Checking out possible senders 
might be a useful line of investigation at least.

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