Very nice lemon scene. Didn't find anything in the way of mistakes, and the 
events flowed well. The 'She's a nibbler line' and an earthling giving an 
alien an 'anal probe' was a nice reversal of the usual thing. Very nice 
addition to that Mihoshi Kiyone story.

DB Sommer 



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