Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fanific][SM/SM][1st Draft] The Amazing Spiderwoman Chapter 10
From: StudioPC
Date: 2/19/2005, 3:22 PM
To: Michael A Chase
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


Dude, I'm grateful as all get out that you provide C&C, and I don't 
mean this the way it probably sounds, but I really wish that just once, 
I could run a fic through my spellchecker, post it here, and not have 
you find spelling errors. *Sigh* Thanks, though, really, I mean it.
On Feb 19, 2005, at 3:40 AM, Michael A Chase wrote:


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 02/19/2005 02:45 AM, StudioPC said:

Jupiter scowled. "Look, I {aint : ain't} no damn conversationalist.
You gonna finish us off, get on with it."

'The wall,' Mercury said and Ami scaled the wall, crawling over to
the doorframe and eased herself down until her eyes cleared the
{doorframe : top}.

"What did you {forsee : foresee}?" Banterman snapped, resting both
elbows on the desk.

Strange sighed. "Gentlemen . . . Nick, Bruce, neither one of you are
men of faith and what I have to say sounds {bizzare : bizarre}
enough to me . . . I can only tell you what I know, whether or not it
is true . . . I choose to believe it is. Will you accept that?

"Close enough. Persia, Lemuria, Atlantis, what we know today as China
and Egypt, all came from the Kingdom of Usaga, which built it's
capital in what we now know as {Antartica : Antarctica} some eighty
thousand to a hundred thousand years ago.  According to my research,
the Usagans tamed the continent, which was far more tropical back
then and built a civilization of which even the Shi'ar and the Kree
would be envious. Eventually, they made it to the moon through a
series of . . . warp gates would be the best term, and from there,
the rest of the solar system. This began what would be known as the
Silver Millennium, under the guidance of the Queen, who ruled from a
great palace on the moon known as the Moon Kingdom. From what I've
been able to determine, the Moon Kingdom had split from Usaga by that
point, though they remained friends."

"No. Humans have no presence on the moon. The Silver Millennium was
just that. A Millennium. It, along with Lemuria and Atlantis {was :
were} destroyed in the Fall."

"Now that we know her name, yes. Sailor Moon, Usagi. The Moon
Kingdom, Usaga, Sailor Moon, it's not a coincidence. If she's not the
Moon Princess, she is the key to finding her." He looked at Banner.
"And that is why I wanted you, Bruce. The Moon Princess was reputed
to be the most powerful of all her kind, and there is nothing that
can stand against {you : her}. If she turns out to be a tyrant,  or
worse, falls under Nur's influence, you're our only hope."

-- 
Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.

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