Subject: [FFML] Re: [Spamfic?][Re-do][R.5] To Stop a Demon
From: JusenkyoGuide
Date: 1/26/2005, 8:29 AM
To: FFML


Had it been a movie, this instance before woman and demon began their
battle might have been enhanced with some music, something
soul-stirring. But instead there was only a chorus of voices saying the
same thing over and over again.

"Pikachu, pikachu, pikachu . . ."

Nan da hell? 

I'd love to hear the back story behind the idea of Kasumi taking a
blood oath. The writing was fairly smooth, and the internal monologue
a good touch, especially given Kasumi's iron control on her
expressions. In the end though I was left a little confused as to what
was going on, why, and why on earth did Pikachu show up?

And that's my two yen.

JG
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