As Kasumi moved Ranma�s blanket aside to attempt to awaken the sleeping
Ranma for breakfast before setting either Akane or Genma to rouse the
sleeping boy, the first thing she noticed was blood. Lots of blood.
Then she screamed. And she didn�t stop screaming for quite awhile.
Short, and ... kind of pointless.
If this were the prologue to a longer story, presumably following how the
Ranma cast react to and cope with his death, then it might be worthwhile.
You don't give any indication of that, though. As the story stands, I
really don't see the point.
Angus