Somehow a bunch of your punctuation got coded as ? marks... otherwise some very minor grammar like a couple of run-on
sentences (grin!)

Keep up the great work!
Dave



----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Josh Temple<mailto:tarne_of_eat@sluggy.net> 
  To: FFML<mailto:ffml@anifics.com> 
  Sent: Sunday, January 16, 2005 23:07
  Subject: [FFML] [R.5][SM] The Return ch10


  The orange-haired girl glared at Alexia. ?Bitch! I?m going to destroy you!? She then screamed after steeling herself. She would kill the monster that did this to her, and then... herself.

  Alexia?s face dropped and to the newborn demon the elder looked genuinely disappointed and hurt. The smaller demon shook her head again. Why did she care what this? thing thought of her. She was an Assemblymen, demons like this were prey to her.


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