-----Original Message-----
From: David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
Sent: Jan 15, 2005 8:55 AM
To: ffml@anifics.com
Subject: [FFML] Comments [SM] Terrible Things to Waste: Part 4

    Flying away, Malance spun around and punched his arm.
A small cannon popped up from his forearm, firing a blast at
the building.  The remnants of the structure tumbled,
leaving nothing but rumble and flames in its wake.

    'Soon very soon.  I'll have him all to myself.'

...and he'll take me in his strong manly arms and...

Hehehehe.  I was beginning to wonder if anyone would start thinking that, I left
enough strong hints.

<snip>

    "I don't think so.  You present far too great of a risk
to us all and we will not engage the Timelords until we have
found out more about them on our own."  

Pluto is being pretty stupid to think that's her decision.  

Not stupid, it's more of knowing who you can exert authority over.

<snip>

    "Now listen up you little bastards," Tracer growled,
"I'm in a hurry, and if you feel the need to have the living
snot beaten from your body then I'll be more than happy to
oblige."

"While normally I'd love to beat the living snot out of all of you, 
I'm in a hurry."

Yeah, that makes more sense. 

<snip>

    "How dare you attack the only real homes of the poor
and unfortunate citizens of this city!"  Serena belted.  "I
am Sailor Moon and-"
   
    A sudden blast sent Serena flying through a few of the
flimsy walls.  Dazed, Sailor Moon watched as Mars and Venus
dodged several more blasts.  Eventually, Sailor Mars landed
next to her.

So why's this guy immune to Sailor Moon's power to make people listen
to her?  

Cause he's from another dimension.  Duh!  ;p

<snip>

    The night sky lit up with their attacks.  The blue
robot accelerated barely outrunning the streams of light and
fire.  Serena's eyes never left the sky as the flame of the
robot's engine faded into the darkness.
   
    "Oh thank God!"  Serena breathed, nuzzling Tuxedo
Mask's chest.  "Thank God you made it back in time."

Er...what's the big?  He didn't actually do anything.  

Exactly.  Sailor Moon always makes a big deal when he shows up no matter how much he doesn't do.

<snip>

    Suddenly, a motorcycle zoomed by.

    "Yyyyyaaaayyy!"  A boy on the back of the bike
screamed.

Yyyyyiiiiiyyyy!

("Yay" sounds too cheerful.)

Heh.  Good point.

<snip>

Thanks David.  I appreciate the comments, I was beginning to worry that I was boring people to tears...

Bastion



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