Wow. This has been sitting around for a while.

'One of these days,' she decided to herself as she turned to face
Usagi, who was perched on a small statue just outside the Bugle's
entrance. 'I'm going to find out how she accurately vocalizes a text
only language.'

"And when I say pwned," Usagi continued, indicating the copy of the
Bugle in her hand. "I mean butt handed to you on a silver platter and
lightly garnished  with

extra space

your head." Somehow, Ami managed to keep the

fact that every part of her body was in agony off her face as she
walked over to Usagi, who was grinning her usual mad grin. "And not to
mention you and that Green Goblin fellow tore up an entire urban mall
last night. I mean, really." She flicked her gaze over the paper. "You
took out a Spencers'? The places that sell high fashion crap, congrats,
but SPENCERS'? I thought I taught you better then that."

Heh. That would be one of her must see places

"I don't recall accepting you as any kind of teacher," Spiderwoman said
levelly as Ami sat down on the statue gingerly,

two adverbs a little too close together. I recommend losing one.

 wincing as muscles and

bruises protested. "We are allies, which means I do not have to accept
any reprimands from you."

"Whose

Who's

"What in the hell?" Jupiter demanded.

"Beats the hell out of me,"

two different people using 'hell' i'd have one say something different

Sailor Moon said. The blond held a high end

model Palm Pilot in her hand and was looking for something on it's

its

Banterman glanced at Ami's face, made a hissing noise, and then began
rattling off a list of things he needed. Veronica vanished when he had
finished and Banterman began to wipe the makeup off Ami's face with a
delicateness that belied his sheer bulk.

Nice touch on Betty, I mean Veronica's, name

Jupiter, having no answer to that, looked over at Sailor Moon. The
blonde had cut up a latex glove to make finger puppets and appeared to
be putting on a X-rated puppet version of Tokyo Pig.

....

"Grandfather's lunch!" She

she

Banterman raised an eyebrow. "You've read his paper."

Ami nodded. "All theory though.

theory, though

Strange and Fury owed him big for this.

Dr. Strange is way out of Usagi's lead, if used with one half of his true
abilities.

"Oh its no trick, Usagi," Naru said with a smile. "No trick at all.
More like . . . payback."

Nice touch. Am eager to see more.

DB Sommer



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