All of a sudden, her left ear started to burn. In addition, the
powers she commanded also sensed a stirring of energies that gave
her pause.

Her goddess-sense is tingling!

Looking up from her plans, she stood up and followed her sister to
the genkan. "What's wrong?"

Even though we can reasonably assume this is Skuld speaking, from the
context in this and the below paragraph, you should still identify the
speaker by name, as there are presently three characters in the scene to
whom the pronoun "she" can apply, and prior to this it has applied to
Belldandy.

She had just lied to the one she loved most.

Technically, she didn't lie--which is good, seeing as, you know, she *can't*
lie.

Turning to a garbage heap, she noticed a cracked mirror among the
debris and the mark on her forehead expanded and glowed with an
intensity that rivaled the luster of the mid day sun. With a
running start, she leaped into the air and into the mirror, sending
her through the ethereal byways of her mode of transportation.

One wonders why she didn't do this in the FIRST place, instead of running
through the streets and wasting even more time...

considering that Mara was quite notorious for keeping her
corruption well hidden.

Didn't think Mara could be that subtle.

The demon's shadow started laughing. It developed into a riotous
guffaw that echoed throughout the void. "You?! Threaten someone?!
That'll be the day!"

Boy, is she in for a surprise.

The goddess remained quiet and closed her eyes. It appeared that
the shadow would never listen to words. Then again, demons hardly
ever did. With a sigh, the goddess knew that there was no
alternative anymore.
"Do you now?" Belldandy said casually.

"Oh, is the puppy going to bite me?" the shadow sneered again.

Duck and cover time!

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