Oh, this is a twisted concept from the sounds of it:

 Oh My Demon

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Part 1

"God am I hungry," said Tomo as she laid on her bed. Her father
had gone out on some errands so she had the house to herself. The problem
wasthat

was that

 there was no food, readily available. This wasn't to say that there

wasn't food in the house. It was just that all the food in the house
requiredcooking.

need a space there

{Well, guess I'll have to order delivery,} thought Tomo as

she grabbed the phone and dialed.

and I'd separate the thought.

[Megatron Burgers. This is Chiyo how may I help you sir or
ma'am?] said the cute voice on the other end.

"Hey, Chiyo-chan it's me Tomo."

[Oh Tomo,

Oh, Tomo

do you need next week's schedule?]

"No, I need to order delivery."

[Um Tomo, we don't have delivery.] This didn't faze Tomo a bit.

Heh. I wondered about that.

"I know Yomi,"

that sounds off. I'd reword it somehow.

"Hey Yomi,

need commas there.

Can you go get some takeout and bring it to my house.

house?

"Hey cut it out!

Hey, cut

"AHHHHHH! Tentacle Rape!!" Yell Tomo as she once more started
throwing things.

"I said cut it out, I'm not that kind of demon!" yelled Ranma

Tomo: So you're what, a gay demon?

"You're here to buy my soul!" yelled the girl as she started
swinging.

"It doesn't work that way," said Ranma as he easily dodged her
clumsy attacks.

Ranma: Besides, based on your life to date, we're going to get it without
having to put out a wish for you.

"How dare you make such accusations? I'm as pure as falling
snow!"

"Over a refinery maybe."

Heh

"How about all that hell you gave Miss Kasuga when she first
arrived?"

"That was because I thought Osaka was going to be my new rival."

Actually, I'm astounded Tomo remembers that Osaka's name was Kasuga

"And what about all the times you picked on little Chiyo?"

"That was just a little harmless fun!"

"Harmless fun huh, how about when you were eight and decided to
play flamethrower marine with a can of kitchen spray?"

"A-Ah come on, Yomi's hair grew back!"

Heh.

"The tool shed you burned down didn't. Listen, I can spend the
next three years talking about the stuff you did to deserve this wish. Why
don't you make your wish so I can go home and you can get on with your
life."

life?

"Some demon you are," said Tomo. She then started something
extremely dangerous. Tomo started thinking. {Wait a minute, there's no way
this is real. This is a joke, yeah that's it. Yomi somehow snuck this guy

in

and is video taping me right now.}

"This is not a joke set up by Yomi," said Ranma.

{HA! An emission of guilt

that should be 'admission' unless you meant her to mess the word up.

"Tomo?" Said girl turned just in time to see her father enter
theroom.

"D-Dad?"

"You've got a boy in your room!" yelled a red faced Mr. Takino.

Mr. Tokino: I can't say this surprises me. Your mother was putting out for
guys when she was fifteen. At least you had the decensy to be a late
bloomer.

Walking up the stairs, Tomo went into her room. Looking down at
the futon she began thinking again. {Oh I see, he's just trying to lure me
into a false sense of security. Soon as I start changing my cloths, BAM

out

come the tentacles. Well he won't get my flower. Nope. No way.}

Heh. Cute.

Ranma waited a moment before opening the door and stepping in.
Once inside, he found Tomo still sleeping on her futon. Taking a closer
look,he noticed that she was shivering and was still in her wet cloths.
Seeing that the girl now had a fever, Ranma shook his head. "Idiot."

You're following the AMG plotline way too much here.

"You've never done this before?" asked Tomo, slightly surprised.
The demon shook his head.

"It's not my usual job. I was filling in for a friend. I'm going
to have a long talk her later."

talk with her

"Who's at the door Tomo?" asked Ranma stepping in with his shirt
still off. Tomo didn't like the way her friends were suddenly looking at
Ranma. Walking up to him she grabbed hold of his arm. {Mine, mine, get

your

own sexy demon stud from hell!} "Ah guys, this is Ranma. Ranma, these are

my

friends: Chiyo, Kagura, Yomi, Sakaki, and."

"DEMON! There's a demon here!" yelled Osaka as she pointed at
Ranma.

Heh. Cute that she sees him for what he is.

Interesting enough, though I wonder if you'll really continue it.

DB Sommer



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