----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Daniel Jess Gibson" <dan_s.comments@worldnet.att.net>
To: "Maciej �enczykowski" <maze@cela.pl>; <RaeMowse@aol.com>
Cc: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, October 28, 2004 11:28 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: For Better or For Worst-Case Scenario Ch1: Be Careful
What You Ask For...

Maciej,

Now this is a fic!

Makes for some real heavy reading...

Can't wait to see what happens in chapter two, especially with the
cliffhanger in the second to last paragraph.

     I'm sorry.  I couldn't diagree with you more.  As soon as I started
reading, I knew exactly how it was going to end.  I agree it shows great
promise, but you read through it, and again, and you're left with the
inescapable conclusion the author was trying to say something, maybe
something profound, and you haven't the faintest idea what it is.
     I would suggest you try and match the characters actions to their

words

a bit more carefully, the motivation seems completely incomprehensible to
me.

Cheers,
MaZe.

On Thu, 28 Oct 2004 RaeMowse@aol.com wrote:

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Daniel

Okay... I agree that the ENDING was predictable.   AND yes, it IS an often
used plot.  But in my opinion the writing was well done, the phrasing was
rather novel, and the unexpected tack of posting the fic in Old High Martian
was quite clever.

Besides, we don't get enough Digimon/Utena crossovers here anyway, much less
those that work.


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