Interesting character in Mr. Sangnoir, there. A little rough around
the edges for AMG, but I'm sure he'll settle in. 

A few points on the storyline:

Keiichi and Megumi's father and mother insist upon being referred to
as Keima and Takano. They're very strict about not using titles. This
came as a big surprise to manga readers, as all the hints pointed to
conservative parents, and Keima and Takano are anything but. 

The roughing up of Skuld scene seemed abrupt to me. On the second
reading Doug didn't come across as a complete jerk like he did the
first time I read it, but it still felt like it came out of nowhere. 

Other than that, it was an enjoyable read. I'll be looking forward to
seeing more of this character.

Brian Welch

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