Michael A Chase <mchase@ix.netcom.com> wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 09/11/2004 11:57 AM, Gary Kleppe said:

Zhen glared sternly at the hulking brute on the other side of the 
demolished wall. "Momotaru." "Um, I don't think so. This looks way
worse than what she'd do." A {sizeable : sizable} portion of one of

According to dictionary.com, both spellings are legitimate.

At this point I was wondering if Momotaru had been sent for some panties
at Happosai's place.  I didn't think he'd worry too much whether they 
were still occupied.

Heh. He probably wouldn't.

Happosai's voice lowered. "Briefs."

This does have a certain poetic justice though.

"That's all right. I'll sign it as is." Pen once more in hand, Zhen 
began {initialling : initialing} the blanks on each successive

Not sure about this one, but will change.

"Well, first of all, sir, your daughter Urd tried introducing 
object-oriented programming into the Yggdrasil system, and ended up 
creating new sentient life without proper authorization. She's
waiting outside for {diciplinary : disciplinary} review."

Oops.

"No, sir. According to his file, he's a {worshipper : worshiper} of
women's undergarments."

Not sure about this one. I think either way is correct.

"There you gotcher Playhouse, your Lesbian Lust, your Shaved Nuns in 
Bondage Quarterly -- all five of this year's issues -- and I even
threw in a copy of the Pretoria's Secret {lingere : lingerie}

My mistake.

catalog. I had an extra." Mara chuckled. "I'm all set up to YTP these
over as soon as you deliver on your end of the bargain."

Five issues a year of a quarterly...  Must have had a lot of extra material.

Or a twenty-percent discount. :)

For a moment, Yotsuya pondered. To agree would be a {betrayl :
betrayal} of the trust placed in him by the Almighty and his other

Oops again. Must remember to spell-check.

No, he thought as he slowly lowered the diskette into the range of
her reach, it was no skin off his nose {whatsover : whatsoever}. And

And again.

She sighed as curiosity fought with better {judgement : judgment},

Another one that can be done either way, I think. It just doesn't look
right to me without the other "e".

"The job, {deary's : dearie}, is public relations."

D'oh.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.garykleppe.org/comics.html

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