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On 08/25/2004 10:18 PM, PsyckoSama (Sam Phoenix) said:
With a glance at Ranma she wondered, who could get enough? The young
buck was a cutie, and it had been far {to : too} long since she had
'tasted' the real thing. Twenty-five years was just too long a time...
Setsuna sighed, and shook her head. Pinching Ranma's cheek, she
said, "I dont think so my adorable little Ran-chan. I'm not letting
go of you THAT {easily : easly}."
They both dropped their bags and began to {stealth towards : sneak
toward} the kitchen. If Setsuna was cooking something couldn't be
right. Was this the sign of a Dark Kingdom plot, or was Haruka just
being exceptionally paranoid?
Setsuna was dressed in an apron, and {men's : a man's} Chinese shirt
that was several sizes to large. It made an effective dress,
preserving her modesty while leaving her long shapely legs clear to
view.
"Haruka, say a word and I will have to hurt you. You can {: keep} your
paranoia to yourself for once."
"{Ranchan : Ran-chan}?"
Ranma turned around and sighed, looking at the beautiful, robe-clad
woman standing in the doorway. "I'm sorry, {Setchan : Set-chan}, but
the crap in my life never stops..."