On Aug 6, 2004, at 7:40 PM, DB Sommer wrote:

It worked. Never argue with results.

True. Though it might be said that Usagi would do it anyway.

"I hate it when you apply logic to my unsubstantiated declarations,"
Usagi said and turned to rummage in the stash of clothes.

Vexing, it is.

Tell me about it

"You sired her, she has your name."

"Her siring was an accident, her name a mistake on the part of the
hospital. I call her my daughter because it's convenient."

Heh. Interesting.

Just seeding plotlines for the sequel(s)

"Motoki," Ami said after a moment's thought. "Motoki James Watanabe."

Heh. So it is MJ. Thought as much.

Homage is a wonderful thing.

Superintendent Souma and his Daughter Beryl lived in the penthouse of
Tokyo's tallest apartment building. Souma had won high accolades from
peers and parents alike for his strong leadership and cool head in
crisis.

His elevation to superintendent had been but a matter of time.

combine this with the other paragraph

I was going for a disjointed, surreal feel.

"I need only give this to my father," Beryl said softly as she turned
the pages. "Usagi, with this alone, I could destroy you. But it's not
enough. For what you represent, it can never be enough. Even were your
death to last an eternity, it would not be enough." She smiled. "But 
it
will do." The book snapped closed and she replaced it in her bag.
"Three months, Usagi. Three months and then you pay for Serenity's
crimes . . . and your own."

Hmm. Interesting. We'll see what happens.

I just hope people will like it.

-Steve "Komodo" T.
http://www.geocities.com/studio_pc_hub/



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