Well, I finally got to reading this. Sailor Shubby-chan was fun (Wah, 
you made Hotaru the evillest one! But then, she spends most of the 
first season she appears possessed by eee-vil, so I suppose that kind 
of makes sense), but the rest was pretty much one long slam on 
Ranma... Unfortunately, with the way your universe works (that is, 
with the one thing he's ever been good at essentially useless except 
against the popcorn mooks - That doesn't say very complimentary 
things about Saffron, either, in terms of his god status, nor 
whatzername who fell in Spring of Drowned Ashura, come to think of 
it) and the hardness of the Soatome cranium it takes that kind of 
relentless grinding to get him to make the needed changes. I agree 
with him about the unfairness of being considered a chore for being 
on the less effective end of the scale where no one begrudges Shinji 
of it, but Shinji doesn't go about proclaiming himself the best and 
expecting to be treated like it, either. Hmmm... now how to get Ranma 
to do a merge with Shinji - a bit of cross-contamination there would 
be just what the doctor ordered for both of them.

Presumably, next chapter will focus on the expeditionary force, since 
this one covered things at home, then? Lord Kinbote awaits, in his 
fiery den! ...or something. Yeah, definitely 'or something.' It can't 
go any worse than Bell teaching Rei how to cook.

- CD, Ia, Ia ptang! Lemurs ptang! Frink frink, Ia!

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