DB Sommer wrote:

"It took you long enough to answer!" Tomo grumbled, though she kept right on
hitting the doorbell until she finished the song.
 

Heh.

"I mean there isn't a roof." Tomo pointed upward.

Kagura looked up. While there was actually a roof, there was also a jagged
ten foot diameter hole in it. Black charring around the edges contrasted
sharply with the blue sky that showed high up above.

"That's going to be our new skylight," Osaka provided in explanation.

"I... see," Kagura said slowly.

"I should also mention that fireworks are more impressive when they're shot
off outdoors," Osaka added.
 

Heh.

Tomo opened it and stuck her head in. "Cool, I've always wanted to slide
down one of these."
 

This is SO Tomo.

"Right, and then we'll visit Kaorin, since she misses us so much. I'll bet
she even misses Kagura, who she never met."
 

I think in the manga (at least) Kaorin and Kagura overlapped in 
Yukari-sensei's
class for the girls' junior year.  They should know each other, if not 
particularly
well.

Anyway, nice short.  It had some funny parts.




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