Was there a Chapter 1 posted?  I don't seem to have it...

I ask this because I don't have it and really because I wanted to check at
what point in Naruto are you basing this off of.  I am fairly new to Naruto,
so please excuse any ignorance... if there is even a manga I have no idea.
I've only watched the anime and the rest of the second season DVD's haven't
been released (only up to vol 7) ...

Otherwise... I thought the premise was ridiculous... at first.  I'll admit
I'm a bit curious after having read 2-4.  It all could be a bit tighter, but
the writing isn't bad and the plot development is shaping up pretty
decently.  Based on your chapter length and pace... let's see some more of
this before I give a final judgement.

One question though... what's with the sexy no jutsu and Hermione?  Why the
R 1/2 like Kuno play here?  The development of the sexy no jutsu and a
separate personality is O K I suppose, but why have Hermione not know about
Henge?



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