Subject: [FFML] Re: The Big Choice
From: Denise Cameron
Date: 7/3/2004, 4:52 PM
To: Cute Neko Kaydee , ffml@anifics.com





Enjoy the fic.^_^



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Umm. You know, it's a great idea to put tags in the subject line that let 
people know what animes are being used here. I see Ranma, Pokemon, and Buffy 
the Vampire Slayer, but, well...I have no clue who Michiru is. That's 
probably why I don't get the point of this fanfic.

Your writing is good, I just don't understand.

Oh, and it seems a little odd that the fiancees would show up late. I'd 
imagine most to all of them would be early, with Akane showing up just on 
time, or a few minutes late.

- Denise


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