Enjoy the fic.^_^
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Umm. You know, it's a great idea to put tags in the subject line that let
people know what animes are being used here. I see Ranma, Pokemon, and Buffy
the Vampire Slayer, but, well...I have no clue who Michiru is. That's
probably why I don't get the point of this fanfic.
Your writing is good, I just don't understand.
Oh, and it seems a little odd that the fiancees would show up late. I'd
imagine most to all of them would be early, with Akane showing up just on
time, or a few minutes late.
- Denise
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