Cute Neko Kaydee wrote:

Enjoy the fic.^_^

... Didn't you send this to the list once before, already?
It doesn't make any more sense the second time. Even as a spamfic, it's 
just... bad. This reads more like one scene excised from a longtime 
RPing environment (and a poor one at that). Even a spamfic has to have 
some point, some punchline, SOMEthing. This is just "Let's have Ranma 
think bad things about his fiancees, a guest-star by a completely 
unrelated character, and a character that's already in a completely 
devoted and loving relationship show up to marry Ranma."
My preference is to give constructive criticism nine times out of ten, 
but frankly that is simply impossible with this fic. There is nowhere to 
BEGIN working on this to make it better. It's a complete tear-down job, 
right up to smashing up the foundation and laying a new one.

-Rann


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