Yay! I'm finally at May

      A he

As

 >

      Ryu nodded. "I want to try to establish a Kumon branch of the
Anything Goes School. I'm hoping that if I can get trained up enough,
Master Happosai might be willing to listen to my request."

Poor bastard. He really will do anything for the Art. :)

      Now standing on the other side of a truly IMMENSE mahogany
desk, one easily large enough to land small planes upon, he made a
humble bow.

      "Tanaka-dono, I most humbly request that you review my petition
to purchase the NinjaBurger Franchise for Nerima."

I don't know. Aren't Ninjas kind of fattening? I see major lawsuits by
people for Ninjaburgers making them fat. They should cannibilize
vegetarians. No one gets fat on those. :)

      "I still think the children would be of more use to our Master
if they were subjected to more discipline."

      "You will learn differently, teishi. You will learn. As I did
with their predecessors. Ahh... those were the days."

      "True. How IS Bond-san these days?"

      "Still chasing the ladies, from what Q tells me."

>From his wheelchair, mind you. And curiously, he looks a lot like Remington
Steele nowadays.

      He had to throw away the entire first page, however, seeing

as it consisted of two words, repeated over and over again.

      "why ME?!"

But it is a good question. :)

Amusing work. Feels like a lot of set up without a whole lot of action at
the moment. I'm eager to see more. What was there did flow well and the
prose was good. No grammar errors except the one I saw at the start.

DB Sommer



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