Elistran wrote:

 > I'd drop the 'but of course'. Too cliche.

Hmm... I can see that it flows a bit better without the 'but of
course', but I'm not sure I see why that's a cliche.

Sorry. I meant it's something of a stock phrase. It didn't fit well either.

DB Sommer



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