Many thanks to everyone who gave C&C and sorry to take so long to get 
back to you - I've been away from my computer durring Akon, which I (and 
my wallet) am still recovering from.

At this point I hope to have the second chapter of city done by the end 
of the month, along with a corrected version of chapter 1 for your 
reading pleasure.

Gamlain
Transuniversal Lunatic
gamlain@airmail.net


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