Genma froze when he looked at his, currently demonic and female, son. He had

always been afraid of those purple and blue eyes, but now they were much
worse.

   I have the feeling that Genma, Nabiki, and Soun are going to end up being
watched quite closely for some time to come.

"Our? What do you mean? You're just the demon I was modeled after."

DarkStar snickered.

   I was wondering about that.

"It looks really good on you," Akane said with a smile. As much fun as it

was to pick out clothing for herself and her mate, it was another matter for
find stuff for their mother. The blue-haired succubus found her mother's
modesty

it was another matter <to> find

How bad could it be? Ranma thought with a shrug. She had already tried out

something that was one step from being naked. The demoness shook her head. The
things she did for her kids.

   LOL!

It was somewhat unnerving to see two moderate and one very strong Pattern D

show up over a Company base. Although, the nineteen year old operations agent
found seeing the demons in flight was also unsettling.

   I can imagine how that would be.

"How big? How many" Agent Morrison's commanding officer asked.

"How big? How many<,>"

"How come it's death for you but demon for Akane?" the redhead asked.

How come it's death for you<,> but

"It's okay. I had to ask," Ranma explained in a distant voice. That

confirmed it. If her mother or her fiancee was wounded beyond medical
treatment she had to watch them die.

   Ouch.

"Mommy? You okay" Nariko asked as she leaned on the taller succubus.

You okay<?>"

Kasumi parked her car in a supermarket parking lot. Nearby was a group of

WIC Humvees and a pair of trucks. One of which was the modified
tractor-trailer that served mobile command center. Kasumi went to the trunk of
her

modified tractor-trailer that served <as a> mobile command center.

I think that would work better

Ranma looked at the display and shook her head. It looked like she could

bring her kids in on the fight. She still felt reluctance at it, but they had
to start sometime. "Mom, I'd like you to change the battle plans a bit," she
requested. Her own fears for what the fight would do to her humanity, her
kid's humanity, had to be pushed aside.

"Of course, dear. Captain, we're modifying things a bit," Major Saotome said

Major Saotome said<.>

Also, there's an extra line break above that sentence.

"Yes, Ma'am," Jarvis replied. He kept his face neutral. At least the other

NH's working for the Company were actually part of WIC. The redhead and her
spawn were not. The captain worried that their were insufficient safeguards
around this brood, but it was not his place to complain.

***************


Sailor DarkStar flew through above the town of Vaughan. She spotted the

building visually slightly after she sensed

Sailor DarkStar flew <> above the town

"We had a deal!" Alexia's control started to slip and her eyes began to

flare.

Murdock nodded solemnly. "Yes we had one. I'll be informing my associates of

your failure tonight. It was my fault for assuming you would be competent, or
at least be able to conceal your base."

"You're going to pay for this!" Alexia cried. She wanted to tear him apart

for his insolence, but the demoness knew that the mage would not be taken down
that easily.

"Undoubtedly," Murdock admitted honestly. He could not believe he had failed

to expect that something like this would happen. The plan was starting to
depend more and more on his backup plan succeeding. "Goodnight," Murdock said,
tipping his hat to the demoness. Turning so that his coat billowed out behind
him, he walked out of the restaurant.

   God, I wish I knew what Murdock's angle was! :(

The observer considered abandoning her post, walking over to an agent,

and... Surrendering. The Company had its faults, but at least they were not a
cult. She could be valuable to WIC. She had codes. She had names. She had
locations. She had information.

She had a responsibility to her partner.


Ukyou Kuonji sighed. Her defection could wait. She still harbored a secret

hope that she could get her partner to go with her, and that the Company might
even be able to help him. At the very least she wanted to settle things with
that redhead, and figure out exactly what had happened to the childhood friend
that had betrayed her.

   This, I was not expecting.

"Well, that's easy," Akane laughed.

"Yes it is," Ranma laughed. "Sometimes TOO easy."

   Akane's sudden, awakening... was rather unexpected .

   Normally, I hate Ranma as a girl fics, but this one I can't help but like.
Well done, and thank you for sharing.

--
Druid
moriryu@earthlink.net



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