I originally had a plot laid out that followed the original sequence of 
events in Macek's outline and the novilization by Brian Daley and James 
Luceno (AKA Jack McKinney) in respect to T.R. Edwards (to a point). 
 Upon consultation with a couple experts in military fields that I have 
learned to trust, I discovered that there is no way in hell that Edwards 
could weasel out of getting spaced, with or without a court martial.

I do appoligize, and for only the second time in my time writing 
fanfics, I will have to make a couple major revisions to this chapter. 
 The revision will be posted on my website during the next update, with 
the relevant link included when I post chapter 24 (which is in progress).

As one of my favorite sci-fi characters is famous for saying, "Oops."

Jeremy Bennett wrote:

I like your story so far, though I have one comment.  A commander
-cannot- tolerate insubordination on any level, Especially from an XO
class officer, Tenchi by rights should be spacing edwards out of hand
for what he has done...

Jeremy


 

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