Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Ranma/Love Hina/Goldenboy] Diamonds in the Rough: Chapter 11
From: "Larry F" <lwf58@socal.rr.com>
Date: 6/1/2004, 6:43 PM
To: "'Michael A Chase'" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>, "'Brian Randall'" <brian@azurite.org>
CC: "'Innocent Bystanders'" <ffml@anifics.com>




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Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 05/26/2004 08:07 PM, Brian Randall said:


After Naru had found a cushion, Mitsune showed the magazine 
to her. On 
the cover, in a very revealing red outfit, a long-haired {blonde : 
blond}-haired woman posed, looking somewhat distracted.  The text 
beneath her face read, 'Female Power!  Inside: Exclusive Interview 
With T.N. Software Founder.'

	Incorrect. Brian spelled it right. "Blond" is for male, "blonde"
is for female. Comes from the fact that the word is derived from French,
which uses such gender distinctions. It's exactly the same as "fiance"
and "fiancee".

>From Merriam-Webster:

Main Entry: blond 
Variant(s): or blonde  /'bl�nd/
Function: adjective
Etymology: Middle French blond, masculine; blonde, feminine
1 a : of a flaxen, golden, light auburn, or pale yellowish brown color
<blond hair> b : of a pale white or rosy white color <blond skin> c :
being a blond
2 a : of a light color b : of the color blond c : made light-colored by
bleaching <a table of blond walnut>
- blond�ish  /'bl�n-dish/ adjective



"Yeah, right," he muttered, shaking his head and {eyeing : 
eying} the 
completed work thoughtfully.  The strokes were smooth, 
though the ink 
was still wet.  Not quite with the elegant structure he had 
hoped for, 
but still neat.  "Always follow your heart," he quoted aloud. 
Frowning, he considered adding his name to the writing, but at the 
last moment decided instead to write down Seta's.  It was, 
after all, 
the older man's advice to him.

	Brian can use either spelling. Both "eyeing" and "eying" are
correct.

>From Merriam-Webster:

Main Entry: eye
Function: verb
Inflected Form(s): eyed; eye�ing or ey�ing
transitive senses
1 a : to fix the eyes on : look at b : to watch closely
2 : to furnish with an eye
intransitive senses, obsolete : SEEM, LOOK
- ey�er  /'I(-&)r/ noun


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