Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Fanfic][SM/SM[[1st draft] The Amazing Spiderwoman Chapter 8
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 6/1/2004, 7:35 PM
To: The Wanderer
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


On 06/01/2004 01:37 PM, The Wanderer said:

Michael A Chase wrote:


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 05/31/2004 03:56 AM, Steve T. said:


Jupiter nodded and then had to quickly reposition her feet to avoid
being knocked over as Sailor Moon grabbed her into a bear hug.
"And here I thought you weren't paying attention!" The {blonde :
blond} haired Senshi squealed. "I'm so proud of you!"


Incorrect. "Blonde" is standard for female, "blond" for male. I haven't
been following this fic all that closely, but I don't remember any
gender reversal...

It is standard when blonde is being used as a noun, not when it is being 
used as an adjective.

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