Suggested changes: {before : after}
I was so late getting around to this, I took the versions from your website.
On 05/20/2004 08:16 AM, Bill Heineman said:
Niflheim was not the place most people thought it was. Yes, there
were pools of lava and brimstone in the public baths, but those
needed to be reserved a few days in advance if a patron wanted to
make sure they got the really warm spots. Aside from the studios
where they filmed the "Teletubbies" and the "Police Academy" movies,
Niflheim wasn't that bad a place at all, that was, if one didn't
mind the loud angst filled screaming or the bitter cold.
If Barney is too evil to film there, I don't want to know where it is
filmed.
The Master got very angry. His unappreciative martial arts apprentice
had taken his {stuff : treasures} away from him. Ranko must be
taught a lesson in respecting his elders, he thought. He wiggled to
try to get free, but was unsuccessful yet still unwilling to
surrender. "Give me back my bag!" Pain however, had other ideas and
he stopped trying to escape and rubbed his throbbing forehead. "And
you didn't have to hit me that hard, you know."
The other demons stopped their battle and bowed down toward their
leader in the hope that they would be forgiven and only be banished
for a century or two.
Considering that Happosai may be coming soon, I'd think they'd want to
banished for even longer.
Author's Notes: Please review my story. It makes me feel oh so happy
and keeps your underwear safe and sound.
If you want my underwear, you're even more of a pervert than Happosai.