Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 05/28/2004 12:39 AM, Bill Heineman said:
Akane watched Ranma from behind the police barricade, flabbergasted
that he was being arrested for ridding the world of the greatest
menace to society. Ukyou Kuonji, student by day, {Okonomiyaki :
okonomiyaki} chef by night, stood by the Tendo, waving at her fiancee
to attract his attention. The chef's eyes were filled with tears as
she saw her friend being humiliatingly led away. Akane glowed a
bright blue at the officer who blocked her attempt to jump the yellow
police tape.
The new girl proudly exclaimed, "Shampoo is Ranma's wife!" She looked
in all directions to see if the joyous news of Happosai's demise was
true. If so, it would make Ranma a saint among the Amazon tribe and
strengthen his place among them; once Shampoo {convinces : convinced}
Ranma to do the right thing and go back to China by her side.
"Why, my uneducated adversary, it means that my darling will be in my
care until the trial. My family attorney will see to it that he goes
free until we can straighten out this misunderstanding. After all,
we'll prove together this was justifiable homicide. Happosai deserved
swift execution for his crimes against humanity."
Finally someone who understands what is happening. Odd it would be Kodachi.
"Mr. Saotome is an ambassador of the Chinese Amazon tribe. He is the
husband of the great granddaughter of the ruling matriarch and as
such, he has the full protection of the Geneva convention as a full
ambassador of the nation of China." She lowered her sunglasses and
leered at the detective. "You can't even give him a ticket for
jaywalking."
Even better.