From: "David Johnston"

Ordinarily noblemen don't actually live in a village but near one.

True, but the peoples of Life, (in the game at least) seemed to be much more
close knit then in RL, or even compared ot other Faiths.

I took solace in animals where I could not find it in my own kind. One
of our stable sauruses took great liking to me, and the stablekeeper

ew.  Can't you make the plural "sauri"?

Err, that would be better, wouldn't it?

I never tried to run away, mostly for the part that in Winged Haven
there were more than enough people to hunt me down before I got even ten
leagues away,

I find that implausible.

A:  Sure the thought would have occured to her that nobody might care
enough that she was gone to come after her.

B:  Since she wanted attention, even of the negative kind, she'd get
a certain pleasure from running away and then getting caught.

<Blinks> Oh, well... You're right.

and in the capitol I was not streetwise enough to survive.

At the very least, I knew my limits.

Without exposure to the dangers of the street I doubt she'd
appreciate them.  Also, she's physically dangerous enough that
she'd probably have a respectable chance of surviving long
enough to learn.

She's still 'close' enough to her family to hear the same stories the other
children do, and at her age - 10, when she goes to the Temple - she doesn't
have the strength or cunning to take on trained theives from other Faiths,
or or even adults who have been living on the street their entire lives.

But it occurred from that, something that got me mad.

That sentence just doesn't work.  Delete it.

Alright, here, and a few other places down the line in this chapter, I
deliberatly put hard to understand phrases to show that this culture is a
bit different from ones we might know.

I haven't the foggiest idea how this connects to any anime, but that's OK.

Thank you very much for your time and review!!

Dro'gan, called Niteflier
~Seeking, Searching, Hoping~


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