Well, after a *long* break, trying to get back into a C&C'ing groove.

Avenging
Act II
Chapter 1
Revenge of the Killer Hornet

Glad to see this is being continued.

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"...And so I said to her, 'Just bring your friend along to the hotel, and
we'll make it a threesome.' And you know what she did?"

"No. What?"

"She kneed me in the groin."

Heh.  He should be glad she didn't try for anything worse.

"The frigid bitch."

"That's enough out of you two!" Lieutenant Kaori Makimura shouted,

slamming

her fists on her desktop in rage.

Twin brothers Ryo and Kyo Saeba stared at her in surprise. Kyo then

>From what little I know of City Hunter, this sounds like Kaori's worst
nightmare come to life.

"Out! Out now!" Kaori began throwing everything at her desk at them,

'everything on'

The  pair abandoned her office before she actually connected with any of

the

'The pair'

the fact she couldn't just shoot them out of hand. As much as she despised
superpowered beings, maybe having the ability to geld idiots wouldn't be

so

bad.

Is that going to play any major role in the future?

She was still fantasizing about the duo squirming in discomfort as they

were

felt up in the bar when the men in question ran into her office, looking
more terrified than when they left. Each crouched behind Kaori's desk,

guns

But do they look more terrified than they did in her fantasy? ^_^

Preparing himself for the most dangerous encounter of his life, the

sergeant

regarded the dozen men standing before him. They appeared identical in

every

way, both in height, weight, oily slicked back hair. They could have been

'weight, and oily'

clones. The black business suits they wore cost more than he made in a

year.

The way they stared unblinkingly at him reminded him of the way his pet
snake would gaze at the mice that were put in the cage with him during
feeding time. He gulped nervously.

Now the question I want to know: Is Mousse, in his own endeavours to be a
lawer, being helped out by any of these people?

"And what are you," the sergeant couldn't force himself to refer to them

as

gentleman, or in any sort of term applying to humans, for that matter.

"Here

for?"

'are you...." The'

The man at the forefront pulled out a business card and flashed it at the
sergeant. In bright gold lettering it stated they represented the legal

firm

of Multi-Headed Serpent Unlimited.

'stated that'

"You're from Hydra!' the sergeant gasped.

'Hydra!" the'

pocket. "We demand the  release of two innocent civilians that have been

'the release'

"They were confused from concussions they sustained after having been
assaulted by two criminals, who, I might add, you never bothered to
interrogate, let alone arrest, for their felonious acts. You can be

assured

our clients will be suing for that as well. Now release them," the head
speaker demanded.

Something tells me that trying to press charges against Dr. Tofu would be
frowned upon by their superior.

The sergeant shook his head. "No way. They were caught tampering with the
minds of everyone in the neighborhood, and under section 8 article 4 of

the

'section eight article four'

"Which means you have no physical proof, and only this mystery telepath's
word to go on, which is hearsay" the man pointed out.

'hearsay," the man'

"And no witnesses that they destroyed the property in question since no

one

could remember a thing," a second said.

'witnesses to their destruction of the'

"I have an itch and it's right under the band, and I can't scratch it.

Ow!"

Mentello shouted as he was shocked again.

Can sympathize with that.

The Fixer sighed as the guard walked away. That was exactly what he had
planned to do with the items in question. They had that American genius,
Reed Richards, develop a list of items to keep out of high-tech

masterminds

hands' for fear of them creating dangerous items from mundane objects to

'hands'

facilitate said masterminds from escaping. The Fixer was forced to admit,

'masterminds' escape'

kill personnel that were deemed "too stupid to be of use." The more
spectacular the failure, the more spectacular the death. But Hydra was

short

on super agents, so he and Kyosuke might have some further use for the
organization, besides target practice.

'besides as'

"Marie!" the Fixer gasped out, coughing slightly on the remaining dust.

Yay!  She makes an appearance!

"What about me?" Mentello wailed from his cell across the way.

"Oops, sorry." The Fixer turned to Marie. "Break him out, too."

"I can't do that," she said.

"Why?"

"He's a criminal," Marie said as though even a child would understand.

Hehehehe

"Actually she's the robot I told you about," the Fixer told his partner.

'Actually, she's the'

'Fixer informed'

"You think?" Mentello began looking around for any stray pieces of lead

that

could be used to protect him

'protect him.'

Marie said, "I'm all right. May's been taking readings on me, as well as

He also created May or did he get her through mail order?

helping me with regular maintenance. My radiation levels are well within
acceptable human tolerance. Also, none of the new neighbors have been
vomiting and losing their hair in the past few weeks, like the old ones

did.

I'd say the readings are accurate."

Mentello should about now be wondering why the Fixer hasn't been affected by
the radiation.

"Good." Mentello began to scratch at his scalp, then gave a shout as he
shocked himself again.

Heh.

Now, just how will the lawers of Hydra explain this to the sergeant? ^_^

Looks good so far.  Hope to see more of it soon!

Ginrai

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